On the road, swiftly traveling
onward to a life where I could live
without it continuously unraveling.
On this road, I gradually slowed,
As I neared a man who instantly bowed.
Blue eyes glancing into mine,
I instantly thought oh, how fine
He took my hand with a smile,
and led me, blushing all the while,
to a new beautiful flower lined path.
Far away from the glaring aftermath
of a most destructive past.
My angel, always here to save,
and whom my soul will always crave.
To you I give this fragile heart,
I know that you won't tear it apart.
Bow again, and take my hand,
And lead me across this bight new land.















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"To you I give this fragile heart,
I know that you won't tear it apart."
that part really speaks to me.
This style works pretty well for you buddy!
You forgot to capitalize the 'f' in "far away..."
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He is my night, he gives me warmth and comfort and joy, and all the more emotions I never knew existed in love before.
thanks! i fixed it now, i need to start rereading things before i post them lol
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