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Emily, don't you see? by ~lovingdream:iconlovingdream:



Nights spent crying,
All alone now...
You can feel your heart dying.
He wronged you, my dear.
He took right away from you
Two and a half years.

He was wrong for you..
He was wrong...

How can you ever expect
To have your heart freed,
When you keep tearing the wound
And just keep makin it ...bleed?
Just let me help heal you.
Together we'll be...
Together we'll ...be....


It should be me.


You had poured out your heart,
That much I can see.
And then he chose to depart.
But, still, I am right here,
Don't you see, Emily,
I'll always be near.

Just waiting right here,
I'm not going to -wait!

How can you ever expect
To have your heart freed,
When you keep tearing the wound
And just keep makin it ...bleed?
Just let me help heal you.
Together we'll be...
Together we'll ...be....

I wouldn't have hurt you.
I couldn't have hurt you.
I won't hurt you!

How could you ever expect (how could you..how could you)
How could you ever ex-

How could you ever expect
To have your heart freed,
When you kept tearing the wound
And just kept makin it ...bleed?
I had to help heal you.
And now together we'll be...
Would you, together with me.....


....be?
©2008-2009 ~lovingdream
:iconlovingdream:

Author's Comments

Imagine that a guy is singing this.

This is inspired by my friend...who will never read it, coinsidentally...but that's okay. i'm too shy to show this stuff to any of my friends that i see on a daily basis, or even the friends i don't see that often. but ya.

so she had been with a guy for two and a half years, and i'm not sure of all the details. but he either dumped her, cheated on her...or a combo, and it's been awhile and she's still torn up about it.

i feel really bad for her.

and you know on movies how they always have that one guy who's totally in love with the chick, but she doesn't realize it until a jerk dumps her, and then she falls for him?

ya. i always root for those guys. and so the two combo-ed and here's what you get.

feedback is always appriciated. :)

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:iconpsych0tic-kiss3z-x:
nice piece (:

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did чou think it would be that eαsy
did чou think I’d be bαck for more
loving чou wαs α big mistαke cos I don’t miss чou αt αll
:iconlovingdream:
thanks so much :)

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:iconavelsgard:
very nice
i know exactly she feels
my ex dumped me for one of my best friends.
so yeah nice piece though

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4-18-08
:iconlovingdream:
thanks, i'm glad that people are able to relate, even if it is a little painful..

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hey, this is my writing account..my other account is ~HotChocolateTime
:iconavelsgard:
your welcome and yeah i agree

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4-18-08
:iconlovingdream:
thanks!

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hey, this is my writing account..my other account is ~HotChocolateTime

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